Quick, Run Away

My half of a collab with she did the lineart, and i had to colour it it was fun, and i think i'm addicted to drawing Storm's markings lol. here's a lil story to go with it
It was dark, and the blue lightning marked stallion was trapped. Tied up by a halter and chains on each leg, he could barely move, only to reach his water bucket. He was not ways like this, there ws a time when he was free to do as he wished, and wander the great plains of grass. The came man, they could not destroy the stallion, but they kiled the rest of his herd, from then he was broken and allowed himself to be taken by man. He sighed heavily, he missed the daylight and the night stars so much, but without his family, they meant nothing to him anymore. In years that he had spent in this place, he had been subject to all sorts of experiments, though none had left a permanet mark on his pelt, they all scarred him deeply inside. He heard a sound outside his cell, unlike anything he had heard in this place before. He heard a banging on his door, like the sound of hooves against them, this gave him hope. He let out a whinny for help, and the door opened, a stream of light poured in, almost blinding him, and in the doorway stood a horse-like figure.
'Come now my friend, come out' he tried to walk forward, but couldnt.
'I'm chained here, can you free me?' He then saw that the figure was like one he had heard of in fairytales 'Unicorn' he breathed.
'Of course my friend, what are you here for then? The mare had a red and black horn, as well as her body being black with red feathering on her legs, with black and red mane and tail. with one swipe of her horn, all the chhe halter vanished.
'Hurry, we must run now' They ran out of the cell, and into the sunlight. the grassy plains were a welcome sight to Storm's old eyes. they ran and ran, until they were sure that the men would chase them no further.
'Thank you my friend, how can i ever thank you? My name is Stormrider, and i am forever in your debt' The stallion bowed to show his gratitude.
'it's no problem really, i cant bear what those men do to horses. my name is Spyce, and its very nice to meet you.'
If you read all that, you get this

Lines and Spyce (C) to
Stormrider and colouring and writing (C) me